What do you guys think of the beginning of my short story?

Mar 11, 2011 by smileitsme | Posted in Books & Authors

Question: To elucidate to you why at this very moment I am crawling the stairs of a tall building, clutching a half sunk pluck of whisky and with the 47th cigarette of the day hanging from my lip, I guess I would have to start with who I am and what I do.
I am Nancy, I am an entertainer.

Answer: Grin,

I did a bit of editing for you. It sounds interesting, but it’s a little choppy because of punctuation problems. This will show you how to go about making it sport when you go over it once again. Also, notice how I took out the ( I’s) wherever possible.

pj m | Mar 11, 2011

Writing a conclusion for this essay. 10 points?

Mar 24, 2010 by Helper | Posted in Homework Help

Question: Can someone avoid me build a conclusion paragraph for my essay please?

New York is one of the greatest places that I dearth to live at, let me tell you why. The education is very powerful because there are many places to consider so many interesting topics.

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