What do you guys think of the beginning of my short story?
Question: To elucidate to you why at this very moment I am crawling the stairs of a tall building, clutching a half sunk pluck of whisky and with the 47th cigarette of the day hanging from my lip, I guess I would have to start with who I am and what I do.
I am Nancy, I am an entertainer.
Answer: Grin,
I did a bit of editing for you. It sounds interesting, but it’s a little choppy because of punctuation problems. This will show you how to go about making it sport when you go over it once again. Also, notice how I took out the ( I’s) wherever possible.








